I have just read your whole pick a path story and read all the options. It was a very well thought out story. Some of the links did confuse me. There was no link to get to the option 'grab it' . But it was very well wrote. I liked the amount of options you had. Which gave you a real feel of control of the situations. You used a good chose of words and the slides flowed well. Next time I would double check the links but apart from that it was very good.
I have just read your whole pick a path story and read all the options. It was a very well thought out story. Some of the links did confuse me. There was no link to get to the option 'grab it' . But it was very well wrote. I liked the amount of options you had. Which gave you a real feel of control of the situations. You used a good chose of words and the slides flowed well. Next time I would double check the links but apart from that it was very good.
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